We wrote reports about the Garden to Table raffle draw and the weekend without power in the storm. It is tricky to keep yourself out of the news report and we have been practising not using these words:
This report was written by Olivia:
When the class went to the hall Steve and Steve had a very big barrel because they were going to draw the raffle. There were lots of raffle tickets in the big barrel. Mrs Batchelor won the Toyota Yaris car.
There were first, second and third prize. The second one was a cruise that House of Travel let the winner go on for a holiday. Third prize was a lovely Weber BBQ. There were five Go Pros to win. Sophie and Amanda won one of them. Lily won one of them and Lisa won one. Two other people got the other two Go Pros. They won the Go Pros for selling the most tickets. A policeman and woman were there. They both drew two raffle tickets. Mrs Batchelor was jumping up and down with all her excitement. She was very, very, very, very, VERY happy. Mrs Foley was the top teacher out of the whole school. Mrs Foley was very, very happy because she sold the most tickets.
This report was written by Jokarvin:
In the afternoon at the Haumoana School hall Steve and Steve made a barrel for the raffle tickets. The police came to the hall. They came to choose some tickets. The prizes were a cruiseship holiday, BBQ and Toyota car. Mrs Batchelor won the Toyota car. She was the happiest teacher in the world. She was so happy her face was red. But the other two people weren't there to get their prizes so Mrs Batchelor was the only person to get her prize. Julie won a holiday on a cruise ship. Claire won the Weber BBQ from Mitre 10.
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